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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Is "attendance" okay?

Hi!

Please take look at the following sentence!

The world of marketing faces an increasingly burning issue – how to achieve higher attendance of a webpage by using offline resources (press, environmental stands, POS materials etc.)?

Can you "attend" a webpage? Or should I use some other word? Do you spot any other mistakes?

Thanks Emotion: smile
  

Top answer

"attendance" is the wrong word for web pages. " is wrong in any case. There are various things you can say.

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  • "attendance" is the wrong word for web pages.
  • " is wrong in any case.
  • There are various things you can say.
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"attendance" is the wrong word for web pages. The phrasing "higher attendance of a ..." is wrong in any case. There are various things you can say. One possibility is "... how to attract more visitors to a web page ...". Check that you mean "web page" and not "website". (I would write the former as two words and the latter as one, but people do vary in this.)

What do you mean by "environm
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ayan86how to achieve higher attendance of a webpage
I think you're aiming for "how to increase traffic on a website". It seems to me that the professionals in that industry like the word "traffic" for that concept.

CJ
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Thanks a lot! Emotion: smile
And I will replace "environmental stands" with "environmental ads"!

Best,
A.
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