Iraq- society

hi, i wrote about the society in Iraq and I need help to correct the errors ?

In Iraq there is a collective society. It sees itself primarily as a member of a group. In the group example a large family, you get protection, help and support. But you also have responsibilities! If you violate any applicable rules or does something unacceptable, the whole group to be accountable. We are interdependent. Sphere outside the group are often perceived insecure and unreliable.

In Iraq, the people very helpful and they have trust in neighbors. Example when I was little I was often among my neighbors when my mother went to her job. You should respect your neighbors as if they were part of the family.
In society, people have their roles and tasks. The father of the family his job is buy food and earn money. Mother's role is to take care of home and children.
In the workplace, the boss have power, you talk, like regular workers, never directly with the boss.
Respect is very important, you should show respect to family, genera, adults and people around you. The more respect be shown, the more confidence you get.
You should never leave the family, the children in the family never leaves home until they married. When parents get old so you should not leave them to the service house and similar houses still on the service is available. The children, mostly first child to take care of parents. It is not acceptable that children leave their parents. Within the family should all help each other in what circumstances any time.

Personally, I think it is good to have a family or clan. Because Life is a mystery you never know what will happen, problems can come at any time and you have to have family or relatives who help when needed.