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Aseka Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Invitation letter

Hello everyone!
Is it right to say "I am writing to request your honorable presence in visiting our restaurant chain in New Your"?

Thank in aadvance.
  

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Hello, Aseka—and welcome to English Forums. I understand that that kind of invitation is common in Indian and some Asian Englishes, but it is overblown in western Englishes. Be simpler: I am writing to invite you to visit our restaurant chain in New York.

  • Hello, Aseka—and welcome to English Forums.
  • I understand that that kind of invitation is common in Indian and some Asian Englishes, but it is overblown in western Englishes.
  • Be simpler: I am writing to invite you to visit our restaurant chain in New York.
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Hello, Aseka—and welcome to English Forums.

I understand that that kind of invitation is common in Indian and some Asian Englishes, but it is overblown in western Englishes. Be simpler:

I am writing to invite you to visit our restaurant chain in New York.
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Is is still ok if it goes to Jamie Oliver??
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Aseka Is is still ok if it goes to Jamie Oliver??
I think he would respond better to something a little less formal. He's a restaurateur, not a member of the royal family.

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