Invitation
Hello, can you please correct my below message if there's any mistake. Thank you.
In memory of my beloved Dad, I’m organizing lunch at welfare home next week. Thus, I would like to invite you to join me to "volunteering" at the Orphanage on Sunday, the 27th of March 2017. Please treat this message as a personal invitation from me to you.
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I would write it like this: In memory of my beloved father , I’m organizing a lunch at the welfare home next week. So I would like to invite you to join me in "volunteering" at the Orphanage on Sunday, March 27, 2017. Please treat this message as a personal invitation from me to you.
- I would write it like this: In memory of my beloved father , I’m organizing a lunch at the welfare home next week.
- So I would like to invite you to join me in "volunteering" at the Orphanage on Sunday, March 27, 2017.
- Please treat this message as a personal invitation from me to you.
- CJ
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I would write it like this:
In memory of my beloved father, I’m organizing a lunch at the welfare home next week. So I would like to invite you to join me in "volunteering" at the Orphanage on Sunday, March 27, 2017. Please treat this message as a personal invitation from me to you.
CJ
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