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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Investigation

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"An investigation released by American Medical Association in March, 1999 showed that 15.3% of the whites were under the poverty line, while 45.7% of Hispanics and 42.5% of the blacks were poor"
  

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"An investigation released by the American Medical Association in March 1999 showed that 15.3% of whites were under the poverty line, while 45.7% of Hispanics and 42.5% of blacks were poor."


(With such a simple date, that extra comma is not really necessary.)
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MM always hits the nail on the head.

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