She again intruded into my bedroom and read my personal diary without my permission. Dad! You know I don’t like it, so It’s a breach of the commitment she made with you and to the family. You need to send her away on this ground.
Are these sentences grammatically correct and natural, please?
Thanks.
The grammar is OK, but some of this is not natural in casual speech. eg intruded into / a breach of the commitment she made / on this ground. More natural is eg She went into my bedroom again without asking, and read my diary.
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The grammar is OK, but some of this is not natural in casual speech.
eg intruded into / a breach of the commitment she made / on this ground.
More natural is eg She went into my bedroom again without asking, and read my diary. Dad! You know I don’t like it. She broke her promise to you and the family. You need to send her away because of this.