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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

introductory sentence

What is the proper way to write this sentence if I'm using it to introduce a website?: "Welcome to (name of website), where man's oldest cutting tool never looked so good!"

I want the "welcome" phrase to be a header, and the "where" descriptive phrase to be the first line of the paragraph underneath. Thanks for your help.
  

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" sounds OK to me. However, it needs to run together. Your idea of making the second part the first line of a paragraph underneath doesn't work very well for me, as far as I can visualise it.

— GPY

  • " sounds OK to me.
  • However, it needs to run together.
  • Your idea of making the second part the first line of a paragraph underneath doesn't work very well for me, as far as I can visualise it.
  • If you want to split it over two lines then something like this might work: Welcome to (name of website) ...
  • where man's oldest cutting tool never looked so good!
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"Welcome to (name of website), where man's oldest cutting tool never looked so good!" sounds OK to me. However, it needs to run together. Your idea of making the second part the first line of a paragraph underneath doesn't work very well for me, as far as I can visualise it. If you want to split it over two lines then something like this might work:

Welcome to (name of website)
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