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Advait chauhan Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
Introductory letter
Hi guys, I am looking to launch this marketing campaign and I just finished with this introductory letter. I would appreciate any opinions and feedback on the following. thanks
Hello,
Judging by the activity we are seeing across our customer base most of you seem to be busy too which is great news, considering the doom and gloom in the media. Keep up the good work!!
We are one of the most reliable XXX supplier in and from the XXX and have been for a long time. Our expertise lies in XXX be it 50 pieces or 5 tonnes, we can supply the products well within your budget and time to fit around your requirements. Having a strong base in XXX (country name) also means we can supply any quantity of any part.
We also have developed over 350 bespoke XXX since we started out in 1996, hence, XXX are one of the major departments here at XXX.
If you could get the same product, for a lot less than you already pay for, with reliable service always, is there a reason not to send any of your auto parts inquiries to us? We bet there isn't one.
We look forward for your first response to get the ball rolling.
"XXX" is our website, kindly browse at your convenience.
Best Regards,
Sales Team @ XXXX
Hello,
Judging by the activity we are seeing across our customer base most of you seem to be busy too which is great news, considering the doom and gloom in the media. Keep up the good work!!
We are one of the most reliable XXX supplier in and from the XXX and have been for a long time. Our expertise lies in XXX be it 50 pieces or 5 tonnes, we can supply the products well within your budget and time to fit around your requirements. Having a strong base in XXX (country name) also means we can supply any quantity of any part.
We also have developed over 350 bespoke XXX since we started out in 1996, hence, XXX are one of the major departments here at XXX.
If you could get the same product, for a lot less than you already pay for, with reliable service always, is there a reason not to send any of your auto parts inquiries to us? We bet there isn't one.
We look forward for your first response to get the ball rolling.
"XXX" is our website, kindly browse at your convenience.
Best Regards,
Sales Team @ XXXX
Top answer
1. I would delete it or throw it in the bin after reading the first paragraph. Think how many similar communications these people must get already!
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- I would delete it or throw it in the bin after reading the first paragraph.
- Think how many similar communications these people must get already!
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- You have a few seconds to grab the reader's attention - if you can, put in a (free) sample of one of your products, ideally something used all the time such as tape, bolts, adhesive, even a good pen or pencil.
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1. I would delete it or throw it in the bin after reading the first paragraph. Think how many similar communications these people must get already!
2. You have a few seconds to grab the reader's attention - if you can, put in a (free) sample of one of your products, ideally something used all the time such as tape, bolts, adhesive, even a good pen or pencil.
Briefly, the content of yo
2. You have a few seconds to grab the reader's attention - if you can, put in a (free) sample of one of your products, ideally something used all the time such as tape, bolts, adhesive, even a good pen or pencil.
Briefly, the content of yo
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