Introduction to IELTS Task 2 Writing
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Please tell me if the introduction is all right for IELTS Task 2 Writing.
More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
My introduction:
These days people are prefer living away from their friends and family. This has fewer advantages than disadvantages. When people prefer to live away from the friends and family members, they could find it very difficult when they fall into hard times, and it could have an adverse effect on the children.
In the first body paragraph I elaborate on how people going away from friends and family struggle find it very difficult to deal with hard situations.
And, in the second body paragraph I explain how it affects the children.
In the conclusion paragraph I restate my position and the main ideas in a different form.
Top answer
vsuresh T hese days people are prefer living away from their friends and family . This has fewer advantages than disadvantages. When people prefer to live away from the friends and family members, they could find it very difficult when they fall into hard times, and it could have an adverse effect on the children.
- vsuresh T hese days people are prefer living away from their friends and family .
- This has fewer advantages than disadvantages.
- When people prefer to live away from the friends and family members, they could find it very difficult when they fall into hard times, and it could have an adverse effect on the children.
- This is an unfounded assertion.
- How do you know they prefer to do that?
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vsureshThese days peopleareprefer living away from their friends and family. This has fewer advantages than disadvantages. When people prefer to live away from the friends and family members, they could find it very difficult when they fall into hard times, and it could have an adverse effect on the children.
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