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Son James Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Introduction. Please correct mistakes...?
According to my cousin's favor, I have written his introduction in English, because I've thought I could learn more English through writing this introduction.Since he's asked me to have to use the words he would use in his job interview such as ethics consciousness and communication capability, I'm so much curious if you understand what it has meant in the introduction.Couldn't you read the following introduction ? I hope you correct any mistakes in this thread. Thank you in advance.
"It is required for workers like us to make an accurate estimate on condition and statue for both of international and domestic market which have been rapidly changing day after day because in accordance with sudden change of the market we need to find which way is the most efficiency one to meet our customers' desires and needs.That's why I'd like to apply for this company.If I pass through this employee entrance, you can definitely see I have outstanding ability enough to carry out all of the tasks given to me under the right ethics consciousness and the excellent communication capability required by today,the Global Era. I promise you that I will work harder than the others."
"It is required for workers like us to make an accurate estimate on condition and statue for both of international and domestic market which have been rapidly changing day after day because in accordance with sudden change of the market we need to find which way is the most efficiency one to meet our customers' desires and needs.That's why I'd like to apply for this company.If I pass through this employee entrance, you can definitely see I have outstanding ability enough to carry out all of the tasks given to me under the right ethics consciousness and the excellent communication capability required by today,the Global Era. I promise you that I will work harder than the others."
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Hi, This is very, very different from what would be said in a job interview in Canada. It's so different that it is hard for me to comment. Is this the kind of thing that should be said, in your country and in your culture?
- Hi, This is very, very different from what would be said in a job interview in Canada.
- It's so different that it is hard for me to comment.
- Is this the kind of thing that should be said, in your country and in your culture?
- Is it a Western-style company?
- Why is the interview in English?.
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Hi,
This is very, very different from what would be said in a job interview in Canada. It's so different that it is hard for me to comment.
Is this the kind of thing that should be said, in your country and in your culture?
Is it a Western-s
This is very, very different from what would be said in a job interview in Canada. It's so different that it is hard for me to comment.
Is this the kind of thing that should be said, in your country and in your culture?
Is it a Western-s
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It is for a kind of national company in my country.I suppose the tasks the company would give to him wouldn't require an ability on English. In my country's recent culture, even though its task doesn't need communication skill by English, they so often ask applicants to introduce for themselves by English.
I guess the reason why he has to prepare the introduction for himself is to have to
I guess the reason why he has to prepare the introduction for himself is to have to
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To tell you the truth, it is so unnatural that I don't want to spend my time on it.
Do you want to try to rewrite it in simpler sentences and with more natural words?
Use the pronoun 'I' a lot more.
Clive
Do you want to try to rewrite it in simpler sentences and with more natural words?
Use the pronoun 'I' a lot more.
Clive
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Ah~ I see. Actually he has just given me 2 sentences by my mother language.They were so long sentences.I've already divided them but you've approved it's not enough. I will rewrite them again to make them much simpler, but for more natural expression,I'm not sure it because my English is still poor. I've forgot I'm stealing your valuable time. I'm really sorry for that. After I rewrite and raise i
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