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Japanlluvr Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
introduction paragraph
can someone please check my introduction for my essay? thank you.
Over the past centuries and even to the present day, body shapes, especially female bodies have had always been a common topic spoken of through media and everyday conversations. Evidently, the constant changing fashion of the eighteenth century, where undergarment supports were largely affected by the transformation of the female body shapes. The era where derriere was greatly emphasised, therefore issues are undoubtedly evident by the women’s obsessive craving for perfecting their beauty.
Over the past centuries and even to the present day, body shapes, especially female bodies have had always been a common topic spoken of through media and everyday conversations. Evidently, the constant changing fashion of the eighteenth century, where undergarment supports were largely affected by the transformation of the female body shapes. The era where derriere was greatly emphasised, therefore issues are undoubtedly evident by the women’s obsessive craving for perfecting their beauty.
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It is not in very good shape. I would have to rewrite most of it, and I can't understand some of it. Broadly speaking, you should make sure that each sentence has a subject and verb.
- It is not in very good shape.
- I would have to rewrite most of it, and I can't understand some of it.
- Broadly speaking, you should make sure that each sentence has a subject and verb.
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It is not in very good shape. I would have to rewrite most of it, and I can't understand some of it. Broadly speaking, you should make sure that each sentence has a subject and verb.
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