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Vaz Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Introduction lines. Is this correct?

Hello,
My name is Jack Flynn.
I am a student/tech whiz,
and this is my portfolio.

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Would the above be correct? punctuation wise?

  

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Hi, My name is Jack Flynn. I am a student/tech whiz, and this is my portfolio. === Would the above be correct?

— Clive

  • Hi, My name is Jack Flynn.
  • I am a student/tech whiz, and this is my portfolio.
  • === Would the above be correct?
  • punctuation wise?
  • It's OK, but I suggest 'and ' instead of 'slash'.
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Hi,

My name is Jack Flynn.
I am a student/tech whiz,
and this is my portfolio.
===
Would the above be correct? punctuation wise? It's OK, but I suggest 'and ' instead of 'slash'.

The word 'whiz' may make people think you are a bit over-confident.

Clive
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Thank you. I replaced whiz with tech enthusiast.
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