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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Introduction Letter
Hi, Can some one take a peek at this letter; English is not my first language.
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We would like to introduce our holding company, XYZ Co., as an engineering, procurement and construction group in energy industries. Established by a group of engineers demonstrated significant expertise in managing large EPC projects valued more than … $.
In parallel with above-mentioned mission of XYZ, it has initiated its trading department focusing on supply of petrochemical, minerals, metals and crude oil products.
On one hand, we have strong relationships with main local producers and suppliers of petrochemical products, particularly methanol. On the other hand, we bring together a wide range of international and local firm from diverse backgrounds in business with advanced skills; therefore, the group prides itself as a supplier with perfect solution.
As we found out your esteemed company is a leader in trading petrochemical products, we are going to devise a plan for long term business as one of your reliable supplier.
It would be our pleasure if we receive your intention to proceed negotiation about the details.
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We would like to introduce our holding company, XYZ Co., as an engineering, procurement and construction group in energy industries. Established by a group of engineers demonstrated significant expertise in managing large EPC projects valued more than … $.
In parallel with above-mentioned mission of XYZ, it has initiated its trading department focusing on supply of petrochemical, minerals, metals and crude oil products.
On one hand, we have strong relationships with main local producers and suppliers of petrochemical products, particularly methanol. On the other hand, we bring together a wide range of international and local firm from diverse backgrounds in business with advanced skills; therefore, the group prides itself as a supplier with perfect solution.
As we found out your esteemed company is a leader in trading petrochemical products, we are going to devise a plan for long term business as one of your reliable supplier.
It would be our pleasure if we receive your intention to proceed negotiation about the details.
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Here are my suggestions to improve your letter. I made some deletions and offered replacement language. Take what you find useful.
- Here are my suggestions to improve your letter.
- I made some deletions and offered replacement language.
- Take what you find useful.
- , which is an engineering, procurement and construction group in the energy field .
- Established by a group of engineers, it has demonstrated significant expertise in managing large EPC projects valued more than … $.
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Here are my suggestions to improve your letter. I made some deletions and offered replacement language. Take what you find useful.
We would like to introduce our holding company, XYZ Co., which is an engineering, procurement and construction group in the energy field. Established by a group of engineers, it has demonstrated significant expertise in man
We would like to introduce our holding company, XYZ Co., which is an engineering, procurement and construction group in the energy field. Established by a group of engineers, it has demonstrated significant expertise in man
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