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Suyoung Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Introduction for my webpage
plz check the grammatically incorrect and conversation with me ! : ) ? ~~~~~~~
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hi there.
i like to take a pic and upload my hompage
and i hav a two my webpage .
the first my website adress is "http://www.suyoung.ye.ro"
i made my webpage when i was a sophomore.
at that time .my website was very simple cuz my skill had not good,
2 month later i bought a digital- camera and i need a good notice on the board
i bought a book realated webpage and progrmming. and try it !
after all, digital camera make me study "html "and grphic tools like photoshop, illustrator
as you know.
my second webpage is " senini.cafe24.com"
i made my second webpage to conversation with many foregin friend
i'll posting my article only englsh not korean. : )
anyway my 2nd webpage is under construction and it'll be completed soon
i hope your visit and posting your any article : )
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hi there.
i like to take a pic and upload my hompage
and i hav a two my webpage .
the first my website adress is "http://www.suyoung.ye.ro"
i made my webpage when i was a sophomore.
at that time .my website was very simple cuz my skill had not good,
2 month later i bought a digital- camera and i need a good notice on the board
i bought a book realated webpage and progrmming. and try it !
after all, digital camera make me study "html "and grphic tools like photoshop, illustrator
as you know.
my second webpage is " senini.cafe24.com"
i made my second webpage to conversation with many foregin friend
i'll posting my article only englsh not korean. : )
anyway my 2nd webpage is under construction and it'll be completed soon
i hope your visit and posting your any article : )
Top answer
Hey, This is very informal, not even grammatical but I hope it’s friendly. Why not post some more, we can work on it together. This is just a very quick sketch but it’s worth spending time on it to get it just perfect!
- Hey, This is very informal, not even grammatical but I hope it’s friendly.
- Why not post some more, we can work on it together.
- This is just a very quick sketch but it’s worth spending time on it to get it just perfect!
- … Hi there!
- Welcome to my homepage.
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Hey,
This is very informal, not even grammatical but I hope it’s friendly. Why not post some more, we can work on it together. This is just a very quick sketch but it’s worth spending time on it to get it just perfect!
…
Hi there!
Welcome to my homepage. You’ll find lots of my digital photographs and some of whatever interests me, things that might interest
This is very informal, not even grammatical but I hope it’s friendly. Why not post some more, we can work on it together. This is just a very quick sketch but it’s worth spending time on it to get it just perfect!
…
Hi there!
Welcome to my homepage. You’ll find lots of my digital photographs and some of whatever interests me, things that might interest
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hi aileen
i'm suyoung.
thank u for your reply .
it gets more friendly message than my writing.
i'm posting my webpage to introduce myself where category "suyoung"(this is my name)
i'm suyoung.
thank u for your reply .
it gets more friendly message than my writing.
i'm posting my webpage to introduce myself where category "suyoung"(this is my name)
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I like what Aileen has done although…
Personally, I would make a feature of your less than perfect English. If you have some artistic flair, you could paint your mistakes in bright pinks, blues and greens, make cross-outs a feature. For me, it’s best to be honest with your ability to communicate in English. Make it humorous. Perhaps we could help with ways to make your errors very funny
Personally, I would make a feature of your less than perfect English. If you have some artistic flair, you could paint your mistakes in bright pinks, blues and greens, make cross-outs a feature. For me, it’s best to be honest with your ability to communicate in English. Make it humorous. Perhaps we could help with ways to make your errors very funny
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