Introduction Email to get more business from new client

Hi
i am priya.

i have a machining set-up, and i manufacturing the metal (SS, aluminium) finish parts as per costumer's requirement.. so please suggest whether to add something in below letters.

Also,
the client is my indirect source, and i want to make him as direct source by eliminating the middle person.

Dear Mrs

Greetings from ABC Industries.

We pride ourselves in honouring our clients and our commitment is to provide you with the personal, prompt, and professional service you deserve.

Over the years we have developed the ability to understand our clients, their requirements and most importantly to know what they are looking for.

We have a focused team to know and understand the complexities of each assignment.

Our service is a perfect blend of skilled manpower with sophisticated machinery. We specialize in providing best quality product in the shortest possible time and in low cost.

We can have telephonic discussion as per your convenience.

We are awaiting for your positive reply,

Thanks and Regards