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Cesar704 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Introduction business letter

Can some one take a peak to this letter, englis is no my first lang. the business is a electrical contarctor based in charlotte, NC and Am trying to present my co. to the local general contractors. Thanks again.

Dear
Sir or Madam:

We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company Montes Electric, Inc. so that you may consider adding our company to your list of approved service providers.

Montes Electric, Inc. is a Licensed and Insured Electrical Contractor based in Charlotte and is engaged in a wide range of services in the construction field. Our services include wiring for: New Construction, Remodels, Custom Houses and Additions. Established in 2009, our company is committed to maintain or exceed standards
that are demanded by the best companies in the construction field. We believe in profitable, sustainable and enjoyable long-term relationships with employees, customers and suppliers.

Please do not hesitate to request a quote for your upcoming projects; we promise you, we will give you a very competitive price, If you have any questions or concerns please contact me at 704-615-810.

Thank you very much for considering our request.

Sincerely

Cesar Montesdeoca

704-615-8180

www.monteselectricinc.com
  

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  • A- s Can some one take a peek at this letter ; E nglish is not my first language.
  • T he business is a electrical contractor based in C harlotte, NC and I am trying to present my C o.
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Hi

Thanks for your help.

Here i got a first look of theintro letter, I corrected as you suggest and also made some additions, can you please take a peek at it.

Dear Sir or Madam:

We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company, Montes Electric,
Inc. so that you may consider adding us
to your list of approved service
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AnonymousIt would be my pleasure to provide you with proposals for any upcoming projects
with “fit” into our range of expertise. I feel that we can offer your clients
quality work at competitive pricing.
It would be my pleasure to provide you with proposals for any upcoming projects
which fit our range of expertise. I am confident tha
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Thanks so much for your help

Cesar M.

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