Introduction

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Hello Everyone

My name is Amie.

I would like to introduce my younger sister to you.

Her name is Jane. She is 14 years old and entered the middle school this year.

She has had a good appetite so she is taller than I, and she is in good shape.

My parents like her very much because she studies hard and does well in school.

Her personality is frank and funny so makes people feel good.

She used to be kind to me and helped me a lot in many ways, but as she is getting older, she tries to challenge me, and we get into an argument often on thesedays.

After the argument, we don’t talk each other for a while. But my sister always apologizes to me first after some time passed. It is shame of me.

I realize that she is not a kid anymore. So I determine that I will be a good elder sister for my only one younger sister from now on.