Introduce Vietnam

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Vietnam is a small and beautiful country with victorious history, profound patriotism and wonderful landscapes . Vietnam has 63 provinces with about 98 million people and Ha Noi is the capital. Vietnamese food is known for its distinct use of fresh, fragrant and aromatic flavors. There is a balance of sweet and sour, spicy and cooling, fresh and salty flavors. Our Vietnam is a beautiful country. We have a variety of landscapes which are widely well-known such as Ha Long Bay, Hoi An Old quarter and Phong Nha Ke Bang cave. A long coast with many attractive beaches is also our recognized reputation.Although Vietnam was a rich traditional culture country, it has undergone a great change since 1945 due to the war. But you can still find spiritual values in traditional arts performances such as singing Tru, Cheo, Tuong, water puppet, ancient artifacts at the museums at the cultural centers in Hanoi and Saigon

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Vietnam is a [ 1] ~~small~~ vibrant and beautiful country with ~~victorious~~ a rich history, profound patriotism and wonderful landscapes. ~~Vietnam~~ [ 2] It has 63 provinces with about 98 million people, and Ha Noi is the capital. Vietnamese food is known for its distinct use of fresh, fragrant and aromatic herbs. ~~flavors~~. There is a balance of sweet and sour, spicy and cooling, fresh and ~~salty~~ pickled flavors. [ 3] ~~Our Vietnam is a beautiful country.~~ We have a variety of ~~landscapes which are widely well-known~~ famous landmarks and sites such as Ha Long Bay, Hoi An Old [ 4] Quarter and Phong Nha Ke Bang [ 4] Cave. [ 5] We also have a long coast with many attractive beaches. ~~is also our recognized reputation~~. Although Vietnam ~~was~~ has a rich traditional culture, ~~country,~~ it has undergone a great change since 1945 due to [ 6] ~~the~~ war. But you can still find spiritual values in traditional arts performances such as singing Tru, Cheo, Tuong, water puppet shows, and in ancient artifacts at the museums at in the cultural centers in of Hanoi and Saigon.

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[ 1]: It is not considered a small country.

[ 2]: We use a suitable pronoun instead of repeating the word in such close proximity.

[ 3]: That is repetitive.

[ 4]: We capitalize a word when it is part of a name.

[ 5]: Do not unnecessarily complicate your sentences. Otherwise, you risk making them unnatural.

[ 6]: “the war” would be understood as the war with the US which started in the 1960s. “war” is more general, so it can include previous conflicts too.

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