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WonderPow Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Intro of Law essay needs Proofreading..pls help.
Hello. I am a Thai student doing a degree in International Peace and Security in England. Can someone please please help proefread this introduction of my essay. It seems that there is going to be a lot of hard work for me this academic year since English is not my first language.
Thank you in advance.
Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11. The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action. Some political commentators felt that international law was left flat-footed, incapable even of giving a name to these events, which did not seem to fall under any of its established categories. For these observers, the law has been seriously challenged by the impact of 11 September and a whole new law was emerging. Others observed that it was in fact possible to find solutions to the issues that had arisen within existing laws, and that legal responses simply had to be fine-tuned to address this new situation. In following up on the consequences of 9/11, this essay seeks first to look at the modern definition of terrorism and discuss why it is considered by some legal scholars to be a major obstacle in the fight against terrorism. Second, it will scrutinise international legal measures on terrorist crime. The competence of the mechanisms of international law, and legal institutions in particular, will be discussed. Finally, the justification for the United States’ military response to terrorist groups in Afghanistan will be addressed.
Thank you in advance.Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11. The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action. Some political commentators felt that international law was left flat-footed, incapable even of giving a name to these events, which did not seem to fall under any of its established categories. For these observers, the law has been seriously challenged by the impact of 11 September and a whole new law was emerging. Others observed that it was in fact possible to find solutions to the issues that had arisen within existing laws, and that legal responses simply had to be fine-tuned to address this new situation. In following up on the consequences of 9/11, this essay seeks first to look at the modern definition of terrorism and discuss why it is considered by some legal scholars to be a major obstacle in the fight against terrorism. Second, it will scrutinise international legal measures on terrorist crime. The competence of the mechanisms of international law, and legal institutions in particular, will be discussed. Finally, the justification for the United States’ military response to terrorist groups in Afghanistan will be addressed.
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WonderPow, Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11. The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action. Some political commentators felt that international law was left flat-footed, incapable even of giving a name to these events, which did not seem to fall under any of its established categories.
- WonderPow, Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11.
- The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action.
- Some political commentators felt that international law was left flat-footed, incapable even of giving a name to these events, which did not seem to fall under any of its established categories.
- For these observers, the law has been seriously challenged by the impact of 11 September and a whole new law was emerging.
- Others observed that it was in fact possible to find solutions to the issues that had arisen within existing laws, and that legal responses simply had to be fine-tuned to address this new situation.
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WonderPow,
Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11. The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action. Some political commentators felt that international law was left flat-footed, incapable even of giving
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Gosh...you are really quick. Mr. MountainHiker. Thank you very much for your precious pieces of advice. I will keep trying to improve.
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WonderPow,
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I urge to you to use caution when using my comments. My comments have my bias. Your school and your faculty might be different. Also, your prof's bias's might be directly opposite of mine.
As I wrote earlier, you write extremely well, so I don't think you have much to worry about.
Oh, one more comment: Try to use active voic
We aim to please.
I urge to you to use caution when using my comments. My comments have my bias. Your school and your faculty might be different. Also, your prof's bias's might be directly opposite of mine.
As I wrote earlier, you write extremely well, so I don't think you have much to worry about.
Oh, one more comment: Try to use active voic
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