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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

intro letter of a new service?

Hi guys and gals. could i please get someone to look over this for me? and fix it up?

Date





Name

Street Address

SUBURB STATE POSTCODE







Dear First Name & 2,



Yet another successful year for COMPANY NAME and our clients, so we have decided to expand our overall service to you with the addition of a finance and leasing division



Our new In-house finance and leasing division can provide you with fast and efficient assessment of your finance and leasing requirements including:



  • Refinancing of Owner Occupied / Investments

  • Purchase of Owner Occupied / Investments

  • First Home Buyers

  • Debt Consolidation

  • Construction

  • Land Only

  • Commercial / Business Loans

  • Leases

  • Personal Loans


With this new service comes a new employee which I am pleased to introduce who is a Full Member of the Mortgage & Finance Association of Australia who will be running this division for NAME.



If you would like anymore information on this please contact NAME at the office



Regards,









Thanks Grant
  

Top answer

Hi Grant, Here are a few suggestions. Clive In a letter, put your address, and then the date, in the top right corner. Date Name Street Address SUBURB STATE POSTCODE Dear First Name & 2, What is '& 2'?

— Clive

  • Hi Grant, Here are a few suggestions.
  • Clive In a letter, put your address, and then the date, in the top right corner.
  • Date Name Street Address SUBURB STATE POSTCODE Dear First Name & 2, What is '& 2'?
  • Do you want to say the name, eg Ms.
  • Smith?
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Hi Grant,

Here are a few suggestions.

Clive

In a letter, put your address, and then the date, in the top right corner.

Date

Name

Street Address

SUBURB STATE POSTCODE

Dea
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