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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Intro Help..please help me ..

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  • 00It's Discrimination not to allow gays to adopt, sexual preference does not say that someone can't be a good parent. 02li
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  • 00It will not have a psycological affect.or confuse a child. 02li
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  • 00It's better for a child to a have a loving family , as oppose to foster care and orphanges02li
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  • 00Many concervatives view this as wrong and I belive that is bigotry02li
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0Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Your 1st and 4th points seem pretty similar. 02br 02br 00I always write the intro after I've written the body. 0-

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  • 0Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Your 1st and 4th points seem pretty similar.
  • 02br 02br 00I always write the intro after I've written the body.
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0Hi Anon,02br
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00Your 1st and 4th points seem pretty similar. (I'd also use "sexual orientation" and not "preference." It's not like they chose it like you'd choose an aisle or window seat on the airplane.)02br
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00You can start off by acknowledging that many people disagree, but you feel that there are several points in favor of it, give a very abb
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