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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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hi, I am writing a paper on Wal-Mart and started out with the intro but don't know if it is ok and if the thesis staement is alright as well. Any opinons?
What do you think about when you hear the word Wal-Mart? Do you think I like the low prices; it’s close to my house, that it has everything, and/or I should apply? That’s what I used to think, but after watching the documentary on Wal-Mart, titled Wal-Mart: The High Cost of Low Prices, I now think about how we get such low prices, that there’s over 4 Wal-Mart’s in my town, that I should be more kind to the employees, and other places that might just have everything too.
What do you think about when you hear the word Wal-Mart? Do you think I like the low prices; it’s close to my house, that it has everything, and/or I should apply? That’s what I used to think, but after watching the documentary on Wal-Mart, titled Wal-Mart: The High Cost of Low Prices, I now think about how we get such low prices, that there’s over 4 Wal-Mart’s in my town, that I should be more kind to the employees, and other places that might just have everything too.
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What do you think about when you hear the word "Walmart" ? Do you think, " I like the low prices ", "I t's close to my house ", "It has everything ", or " I should apply " ? That's what I used to think, but after watching the documentary on Walmart entitled Walmart: The High Cost of Low Prices , I now think about how we get such low prices, about the five Walmarts in my town , about being more kind to their employees, and about other places that might just have everything too.
- What do you think about when you hear the word "Walmart" ?
- Do you think, " I like the low prices ", "I t's close to my house ", "It has everything ", or " I should apply " ?
- That's what I used to think, but after watching the documentary on Walmart entitled Walmart: The High Cost of Low Prices , I now think about how we get such low prices, about the five Walmarts in my town , about being more kind to their employees, and about other places that might just have everything too.
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What do you think about when you hear the word "Walmart"? Do you think, "I like the low prices", "It's close to my house", "It has everything", or "I should apply"? That's what I used to think, but after watching the documentary on Walmart entitled Walmart: The High Cost of Low Prices, I now think about how we get such low prices,
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AnonymousI am writing a paper on Wal-Mart and started out with the introThe introduction should be the last thing you write. You have no idea yet what you are introducing.
CJ
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Sorry I forget to state what I am writing about. I just put Wal-Mart and that is to general. I'm writing a presuasive essay about Wal-Mart. I'm trying to presuade people not to shop at Wal-Mart by giving them my experience there and the facts about Wal-Mart.
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