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Bosun Posted 13 years ago
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intrincially motivated
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Intrinsically motivated workers are much more engaged at work than
those who seek external rewards. Therefore, outside rewards, such as money could not only demotivate workers but also contribute to poor work performance.
Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in them at work.
Intrinsically motivated workers are much more engaged at work than
those who seek external rewards. Therefore, outside rewards, such as money could not only demotivate workers but also contribute to poor work performance.
Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in them at work.
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Therefore, outside rewards, such as money (missing comma) could not only demotivate workers but also contribute to poor work performance. Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in them selves at work.
- Therefore, outside rewards, such as money (missing comma) could not only demotivate workers but also contribute to poor work performance.
- Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in them selves at work.
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Therefore, outside rewards, such as money (missing comma) could not only demotivate workers but also contribute to poor work performance.
Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in themselves at work.
Seeking only higher payment will cause workers to less focus on the pleasure they get from the task itself, preventing them from bringing out the best in themselves at work.
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