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Catttt Posted 11 years ago
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into the full confluence that...

Does the following context imply a current of educational regeneration and refinement that had stared by Rousseau and Malcolm Arnold and continued by Herbert Read?

Context:

My school must have been in an ideological backwater because around this time educationalists were beginning to catch up with the sentiments, first attributed to Rousseau, and by way of poet and educationalist Malcolm Arnold’s view that ‘the pursuit of perfection, then, is the pursuit of sweetness and light’, into the full confluence that swept arts education along in the wake of Herbert Read’s seminal book, Education Through Art.
  

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You have stuffed so much into one long sentence that I have completely lost your meaning. You need to make it more clear by using at last two, or preferably more, sentences. Try again!

  • You have stuffed so much into one long sentence that I have completely lost your meaning.
  • You need to make it more clear by using at last two, or preferably more, sentences.
  • Try again!
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You have stuffed so much into one long sentence that I have completely lost your meaning. You need to make it more clear by using at last two, or preferably more, sentences.

Try again!
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lol. The long, complex sentence you are complaining of (the context) is the sentence I found in a book! and is not my sentence!
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The long, complex sentence you are complaining of (the context) is the sentence I found in a book! and is not my sentence!
It's a poorly written sentence with errors, whoever the writer is.


My interpretation is "a current of educational regeneration

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