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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
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That he also demands strict proof of her lack of incurring any additional subsequent debt after July 30, 2002, that should be her responsibility solely.
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Hi, That he also demands strict proof of her lack of incurring any additional subsequent debt after July 30, 2002, that should be her responsibility solely. This is not written in a clear manner. It's not clear what the writer feels should be 'her' responsibility.
- Hi, That he also demands strict proof of her lack of incurring any additional subsequent debt after July 30, 2002, that should be her responsibility solely.
- This is not written in a clear manner.
- It's not clear what the writer feels should be 'her' responsibility.
- It needs to be rewritten.
- Clive
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Hi,
That he also demands strict proof of her lack of incurring any additional subsequent debt after July 30, 2002, that should be her responsibility solely.
This is not written in a clear manner. It's not clear what the writer feels should be 'her' responsibility.
It needs to be rewritten.
Clive
That he also demands strict proof of her lack of incurring any additional subsequent debt after July 30, 2002, that should be her responsibility solely.
This is not written in a clear manner. It's not clear what the writer feels should be 'her' responsibility.
It needs to be rewritten.
Clive
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