Internship letter... pls help!!!

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00Dear e-friends,02br
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00I would appreciate if you can comment, correct, delete or add as necessary to this letter in order to improve the English of the letter below. I want to apply for internship, and my primary objective is to elaborate a peace of research work (a real case problem in a company) in order to finish my business course. The topic will be 01a01font00finance02font02a00 related one, and it will be chosen according to what is important for the company, otherwise I would like to explore a subgect that I already chose.02br
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00Thank you in advance for being hepful. 02br
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01b00 Dear Sir/Madam,02b02br
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01b00 I was very pleased to talk to a representative of the company X and to get to know about the group X at the London Career Exhibition of the 18 of april 2008. As all my experience, as a 05000, was in Oil and Gas construction, I would appreciate the opportunity to join X Group in a future time. However, for the moment, as detailed on my attached CV , I am in my last term of a business course in London 02b00and, as part of my studies I need to prepare a small research based project. The project will tackle a real case problem in Corporate finance or Investment Decisions, and therefore I will be very happy to work on a case at X (the company) or any of its subsidaries. I would like to explore the use of "05100" in long term investment decisions and its limitations in practice, however this may change according to what will be aggreed to be important to the company.02br
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01b00I am very willing to supply you with any further information you may need and I will be very pleased to receive your comments and suggestions very soon 02b02br
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01b00Mr. X,02b02br
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