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Dear Sir or Madam,I am applying for an internship at the English speaking country as IT-management. I am interested in internship to do abroad.Currently I am studying IT-management at the Albeda college in the Netherlands after a few month I have to do my internship.Obviously I prefer to do my internship in English speaking country because much more easier for me to have more work experience and to develop my English language. If you don’t speak the Dutch language fluently extremely difficult to get internship in the Netherlands. It can be very hard for foreign student to gain work experience in Holland.I have IT back ground I can contribute my skill and education at your organization. Over the last four years I did my internship in the Netherlands for one year by IT company.Through this internship, I have gained strong skills in hardware, software and work with different people.I am looking forward to receive your reply. Thank you for your consideration.Yours faithfully,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying for an internship at the English speaking country as IT-management's specialist. I am interested in internship to be taken abroad.

Currently I am studying IT-management at the Albeda college in the Netherlands and after a few month I will have to do my internship.

~~Obviously~~ I'd like ~~prefer~~ to take my internship in English speaking country because it is much ~~more~~ easier for me to have more practical experience and to improve my English language.(communication skills)

If you don’t speak ~~the~~ Dutch language fluently, it is extremely difficult to get internship in the Netherlands.

It can be very hard for foreign student to gain work experience in Holland.

I have an IT background so I can contribute my skills and education to your organization.

Over the last four years I have taken internship in the Netherlands for one year by IT company. It doesn't make much sense. You have had an experience and have worked for one year in the company, have not you? I have had one year internship in a large IT company. My skills included ..... (be more specific)

~~Through this internship,~~ Taking practise in that organisation, I have gained strong skills in hardware , software and work with different people.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

I'm not very skilled in writing such a correspondence, but it seems to me that you should describe what your duties were, what you're skilled in, why you choose them. I have just glanced through your piece. As for me, the phrase much easier shows me that you probably find easier way to solve something and it is perhaps no good putting down this. Some advice:

1. Make up a plan of letter in your own language.
2. Divide it into sections.
3.Deem into what you're going to write in each of them.
4. Scribble down some ideas about each of them.
5. See whether it expresses main idea, your skills, politeness, the goal of your internship and decide whether it is coherent and convincing.
6. Write down it carefully in your own language, see the grammar errors.
7. Translate it into English.
8. Post here.

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