Internet has two sides: benefits and drawbacks

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The internet has many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The internet has become so popular all over the world. Some people say that this tool provides a lot of pros, while others claim that it brings not less cons. Based on my experiences, I completely believe that using the internet is really necessary, especially for learning and relaxing.

It is clear that people should learn from the internet because it gives the user access to information whenever they want it. Nowadays, anything can be answered on the internet, from books to movies and many things. Therefore, people easily looking for a lot of useful materials for their learning via any internet search engines such as Google, Youtube, C?c C?c (a famous search engine in Vietnam), and even Facebook,... Coursera, edX and Khan Academy, for instance, are three of the most learning resources really useful for people in recent years, especially for students, lecturers, and any one who uses the internet to widen their knowledge.

On the other hand, in the modern life people usually feel tired and stressful after a hard working day. For that reason, how to reduce the feeling uncomfortably is the question which is interested by a lot of people, such as officers, students, teachers, doctors,... According to the scientist, listen to music, play games or watching comedy films is the best way to solve these problems. At this moment, the internet, where is people can discover and experiment everything, becomes endless resources for relaxing.

In conclusion, although the internet has two sides: benefits and drawbacks, in my view this technology should be used more popular not only for studying but also for entertainment.

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Le Quang Truc