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A Great Experience with Council on International Educational Exchange


Let me start my story by saying It is with enormous enthusiasm to write an article about my experience in the land of promise. By the way I am Anthony E. Fidelson, a 4^th BSHRM student of Mariners’ Legazpi, yougest among the 9 siblings, and son of a simple fishmonger. Well, we know for a fact that there are lots of people who are dreaming to experience the life in United States of America. I was one of those dreamers whose dream turned into reality. I was really blessed to have the opportunity working and traveling abroad. I thought before that It would be a “hard row to hoe” since we were having financial difficulty when I was on the process of getting there. Honestly that predicament never weaken me, instead it made me stronger and urged me to continue dreaming. I was really one of the luckiest people to have this wonderful experience.

Moreover, it all started on the 15^th of June year 2008. It was the start of my first class in college. I was walking around the school and I saw the poster about the IPTP. The first approach was “ This is it!” .After I saw it I eventually gave a call to my sister that I would want to participate in that program when I reach the 3^rd year, and my sister said “OK”. I was really happy. I even told my mother about it and she was happy to hear it. Unfortunately , in this baffling it’s not always good. When I reached the 2^nd year my family encountered a financial predicament which almost urged me to quit schooling because my mother could no longer afford giving me allowance. I was really in a poignant situation. I thought I could no longer achieve my dreams because of what’s happening within the periphery.

I prayed almost every minute that something would change. After a year, I talked again with my sister for the second time about going abroad. Fortunately, my sister promised that this time she would do anything to make it real. Thank God! He never neglected me. He gave me reasons to never stop dreaming. I talked again with my sister for the second time about going abroad. That was the time that I realized that God has a plan for us. We just have to believe in the power of his will.

Finally, I was third year and at the same time on the process of going abroad. Haikz…Challenges really never stopped. The first one was choosing the place to work. I had 2 choices then the Agent Coordinator and with the CIEE. I was really unsure where I was going to work. I was thinking if I work in Hawks Kay I might be able to earn a lot of money but I also had a second thought about working in CIEE. I was thinking if I work in CIEE I would have the best experience and It was true. Well, I really had a great experience there. I was able to understand the American CultureI, enhanced my language skills both in speaking and writing, and developed self-confidence. I wouldn’t say anything. I would just show what I have here after my work experience in USA. I hope that it would be inspiration to all of you. Remember, nothing is impossible when you believe!( I’m gonna show the very good evalutation that I got from the company.)