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Nhật Bình Posted 6 years ago
Vocabulary

Insolvency

Is this sentence natural?

On the one hand, the insolvency of high street shops may have its roots in the spiraling prevalence of cyber shopping.

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It's possible, but I think you mean something like: "On the other hand, the disappearance/demise/decline of high street shops may have its roots in the increasing use/popularity of online shopping".

  • It's possible, but I think you mean something like: "On the other hand, the disappearance/demise/decline of high street shops may have its roots in the increasing use/popularity of online shopping".
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It's possible, but I think you mean something like:

"On the other hand, the disappearance/demise/decline of high street shops may have its roots in the increasing use/popularity of online shopping".

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