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Rais Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
Inquiry letter
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00 My friend is planning to make financial management information system to a local consultancy firm. Hence, he has written below letter... say inquiry letter. What about this. 02 br
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01 i 00 Dear Sir/ Madam, 00 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding preparation of Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached out line of elements of the system. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 The two highlighted elements including Networking and Data server in the attached file are the part of entire system but optional at your end. Services charges for these two elements will determined separately. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Please go through the out line and feel free to contact for any query you have. 02 i 00 (This line (closing para not sounds good) 02 br
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01 i 00 Yours sincerely, 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Mike Miller 02 i 02 br
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00 My friend is planning to make financial management information system to a local consultancy firm. Hence, he has written below letter... say inquiry letter. What about this. 02 br
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01 i 00 Dear Sir/ Madam, 00 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding preparation of Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached out line of elements of the system. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 The two highlighted elements including Networking and Data server in the attached file are the part of entire system but optional at your end. Services charges for these two elements will determined separately. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Please go through the out line and feel free to contact for any query you have. 02 i 00 (This line (closing para not sounds good) 02 br
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01 i 00 Yours sincerely, 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Mike Miller 02 i 02 br
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1 i 00 Dear Sir/ Madam, 02 i 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 preparation of 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached 01 b 00 an outline 02 b 00 of elements of 01 b 00 our suggested 02 b 00 system. 01 b 00 - this is a bit confusing. Did he have a meeting with them?
- 1 i 00 Dear Sir/ Madam, 02 i 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 preparation of 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached 01 b 00 an outline 02 b 00 of elements of 01 b 00 our suggested 02 b 00 system.
- 01 b 00 - this is a bit confusing.
- Did he have a meeting with them?
- In that case it should be 'with reference to our meeting' and he should address it to the person he saw, not just Sir/Madam.
- If he did not have a meeting with them it is odd to refer to one.
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1 i 00 Dear Sir/ Madam, 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 preparation of 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached 01 b 00 an outline 02 b 00 of elements of
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01 i 00 With reference to your meeting regarding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 preparation of 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 Financial Management Information System for your consultancy firm/ organization, please find attached 01 b 00 an outline 02 b 00 of elements of
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