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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

innocence.

We do not lose our innocence because we are getting older, but we lose it whe we go to difference bad ordeals. Then we become more mean and bitter. The worse is yet to come. We become more apathy

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We do not lose our innocence because we are getting older, but we lose it whe n we go through (various/different ) bad ordeals. Then (,) we become more mean and bitter. The worse is yet to come.

— Marius Hancu

  • We do not lose our innocence because we are getting older, but we lose it whe n we go through (various/different ) bad ordeals.
  • Then (,) we become more mean and bitter.
  • The worse is yet to come.
  • We become more apathetic.
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We do not lose our innocence because we are getting older, but we lose it when we go through (various/different) bad ordeals. Then(,) we become more mean and bitter. The worse is yet to come. We become more apathetic.
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We do not lose our innocence because we get older, but we lose it when we go through different, bad ordeals. Then we become more mean and bitter. The worst is yet to come. We become more apathetic.

"bad ordeals" is pr
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>Not a very cheerful sentiment.
Right, GGEmotion: smile
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