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Anita_a Posted 22 years ago

Innocence

Body
As soft as Silk
Movement
As fast as a deer
Smile
As quite as silence
Don't blame me little one
For falling in Love
With you.

Beauty
Of your body
Beauty
Of your Smile
You are the ensemble
Of beauty
Don't blame me oh baby
For falling in Love
With you.
  

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So simple, so loving!

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So simple, so loving!
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A sparkle in the eye
A tear in the eye

A smile on the lips
A cry on the tips

Close to the mother’s heart
For a father, a love’s dart

A sibling to care
Now something to share

Sometimes a quite house
Sometimes a night of chaos

All this in a newborn baby?
A bit too much for you, maybe!

A rare combination
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I would say: 'That's a girl, baby' sounds better. Don't you think so Anita?
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Thats good Maj. I didn't find antthing rhyming and so wrote that
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Here's the new version

A sparkle in the eye
A tear in the eye

A smile on the lips
A cry on the tips

Close to the mother’s heart
For a father, a love’s dart

A sibling to care
Now something to share

Sometimes a quite house
Sometimes a night of chaos

All this in a newborn baby?
A bit too much for you
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I’m good at math
Still I couldn’t add my happiness
Nor subtract my sorrows
I’m good at management
Still I couldn’t organize my relationships
Nor settle matters with my friends.
I’m good at psychology
Still I couldn’t understand people
Nor make everyone like me
I’m good at philosophy
Still I couldn’t understand what my life meant
Nor did I di
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She parted the lips
The dew drops fell
The sun stood still
And all around was tranquilising
The little parting
Of the lips spread
The smile danced on
The rainbow waved
the overwhelming joy
the birds fluttering
The sky beeming
The glory of the moment
Was the happiness gleaming
On the little face
For the very first
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Hey Anita, you really can write some good poetry!!
Bueno!
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Thanks John. Read all of them....Maybe some will be useful to you for your Girl friend... best wishes.

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