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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Inner peace

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Learn to be humble. Humble goes hand in hand with inner peace. You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and the bottom from your heart will be more tranquil and equable.
  

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I have underlines 2 problems: Learn to be humble. Humble goes hand in hand with inner peace. You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and the bottom from your heart will be more tranquil and equable.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlines 2 problems: Learn to be humble.
  • Humble goes hand in hand with inner peace.
  • You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and the bottom from your heart will be more tranquil and equable.
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I have underlines 2 problems:

Learn to be humble. Humble goes hand in hand with inner peace. You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and the bottom from your heart will be more tranquil and equable.
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Learn to be humble. Modesty goes hand in hand with inner peace. You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and the bottom of your heart will be more tranquil and equable.
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Learn to be humble. Modesty goes hand in hand with inner peace. You don’t need to show others to prove yourself, and your heart will be more tranquil and equable.

'From the bottom of one's heart' is a fixed adverbial phrase meaning 'very sincerely'. It is inappropriate to your sentence.
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