Hello there,
I want to ask one question here .
1)Removing his glasses, the professor shook his head with disappointment.
2) The professor shook his head with disappointment, removing his glasses.
What is the difference between the two sentences?
ritik What is the difference between the two sentences? Not much, because neither one works. Such a phrase has to be intimately connected with the main clause, or else it belongs in a different sentence.
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ritikWhat is the difference between the two sentences?
Not much, because neither one works. Such a phrase has to be intimately connected with the main clause, or else it belongs in a different sentence.
ritikWhat is the difference between the two sentences?
The second one is much less effective because the participle clause is too far away from 'the professor', the implicit subject of that clause.
Besides, that gesture is normally performed with the removal of the glasses first and then the shaking of the head, so you might as well write them in that