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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

-ing and -ing and -ing sentence?

Hello, I'm writing my resume, and try to express the following :

System administration professional with 7 years experience providing technical support and managing server infrastructures and data-center operations across multiple platforms (Linux, Mac, Windows).

Is it grammatically correct? I think I'm putting a lot of "and" in one sentence, but I don't know if this is appropriate Emotion: tongue tied!!
  

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Consider this: As system administration professional for 7 years provided: (a) technical support (b) managed server infrastructures,and data-center operations across multiple platforms (Linux, Mac, Windows).

  • Consider this: As system administration professional for 7 years provided: (a) technical support (b) managed server infrastructures,and data-center operations across multiple platforms (Linux, Mac, Windows).
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Consider this:
As system administration professional for 7 years provided: (a) technical support (b) managed server infrastructures,and data-center operations across multiple platforms (Linux, Mac, Windows).

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