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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you tell me whether the following sentence is okay?
Thank you.

Visual aids can create impact, saving and reducing your words.
  

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Hi, The grammar is OK, but the meaning seems clumsy.. I suggest eg Visual aids can create impact, and require fewer words. Clive.

— Clive

  • Hi, The grammar is OK, but the meaning seems clumsy..
  • I suggest eg Visual aids can create impact, and require fewer words.
  • Clive.
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Hi,

The grammar is OK, but the meaning seems clumsy..

I suggest
eg Visual aids can create impact, and require fewer words.

Clive.
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