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Selena Rodrigez Posted 12 years ago
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information letter
Hello! If someone can help me with letter? The contest is as follows:
Hereby "Med..k" informs that due to the installation works of the new card reader at post No3 the entrance to the territory of business center "Cross Towers" from Novoslobodskaya street will be accessible by using magnetic cards on 09 July, 2014.
Please say if there any mistakes in the letter?
Hereby "Med..k" informs that due to the installation works of the new card reader at post No3 the entrance to the territory of business center "Cross Towers" from Novoslobodskaya street will be accessible by using magnetic cards on 09 July, 2014.
Please say if there any mistakes in the letter?
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Hi Selena; Your notice is quite awkward and unnecessarily formal. k" would like to inform you that a new card reader has been installed at post No3, the entrance to the "Cross Towers" business center. The building will be accessible from Novoslobodskaya street using magnetic cards starting 09 July, 2014.
- Hi Selena; Your notice is quite awkward and unnecessarily formal.
- k" would like to inform you that a new card reader has been installed at post No3, the entrance to the "Cross Towers" business center.
- The building will be accessible from Novoslobodskaya street using magnetic cards starting 09 July, 2014.
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Hi Selena;
Your notice is quite awkward and unnecessarily formal.
"Med..k" would like to inform you that a new card reader has been installed at post No3, the entrance to the "Cross Towers" business center. The building will be accessible from Novoslobodskaya street using magnetic cards starting 09 July, 2014.
Your notice is quite awkward and unnecessarily formal.
"Med..k" would like to inform you that a new card reader has been installed at post No3, the entrance to the "Cross Towers" business center. The building will be accessible from Novoslobodskaya street using magnetic cards starting 09 July, 2014.
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