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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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i am not good in english grammer, please correct thi mail ,

Dear Sir,

This is regarding maintenance problem mail , we have total 5 fire extinguisher in Pune ABZ, out of five one fire extinguisher ( clean Agent – 2 KG) has pressure down that come to red mark , we filled all fire extinguisher in July 2011, and that is valid for 5 years,
I Also took follow-up form Cease fire ,they are ready to solve that problem, but they require invoice for the same, otherwise they will take 10 -15 days time for approval and
  

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I will try to correctly say what you have shown me. However, in some cases, I have to guess at what you want to say. Here is how I would write this: Dear Sir, This is regarding a maintenance problem.

  • I will try to correctly say what you have shown me.
  • However, in some cases, I have to guess at what you want to say.
  • Here is how I would write this: Dear Sir, This is regarding a maintenance problem.
  • We have a total of five fire extinguishers in Pune ABZ.
  • One of those fire extinguishers (Clean Agent – 2 KG) has had a pressure drop into the red zone.
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I will try to correctly say what you have shown me. However, in some cases, I have to guess at what you want to say. Here is how I would write this:

Dear Sir,

This is regarding a maintenance problem. We have a total of five fire extinguishers in Pune ABZ. One of those fire extinguishers (Clean Agent – 2 KG) has had a pressure drop into the red zone. We filled all of
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Hi DoctorD
Could I ask if you could correct grammar points for me that I've looked at that are hard please?
Thank you and happy New year and holidays
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If I can help, I will. However, I only check into English Forums now and then. So you may not get a quick answer.

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