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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Informal Letter

Is this too bad?
I am not native speaker thought..
Dear Tom,

Hope your well. Did your mum let you to go with us?

You know that concert you were talking about. Well actually, there are two of them, but none of them is the one you wanted to go. I’m sorry. There aren’t tickets anymore.
But they still have tickets concert of Mogwai. It will be held on 19th.

What do you think? I heard they were great in Prague, and read something from Wikipedia, but honestly. I don’t really know much about them, I just remembered you’ve mentioned them lately. Then there are only tickets to Björk. She’s good and everything, but we’ve been at her concert already. There will be some new songs, thought. Oh, and this one will be on 18th, so it would be easier for you to get there.

They are both for same price € 25, and I think Mogwai will be more interesting.
But you will have to decide. And of course, let me know, so that I can get tickets before you come.

Bye for now
All the best

Martina
  

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Dear Tom, Hope your you're well. Did your mum let you to go with us? You know that concert you were talking about.

  • Dear Tom, Hope your you're well.
  • Did your mum let you to go with us?
  • You know that concert you were talking about.
  • Well actually, there are two of them, but none neither of them is the one you wanted to go to .
  • I’m sorry.
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Dear Tom,

Hope your you're well. Did your mum let you to go with us?

You know that concert you were talking about. Well actually, there are two of them, but none neither of them is the one you wanted to go to. I’m sorry. There aren’t tickets anymore.
But they still have tickets concert of Mog
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Maybe it is bit late, but thank you Emotion: embarrassed

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