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Ignatius Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Informal email
0 I should write something like this (see below) but in an informal and kind manner. Any help or correction to my draft version?? 02 br
00 Thanks in advance 02 br
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00 Hi George, 02 br
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00 I am terribly sorry for your plans. Unfortunately, I already make an appointment that I cannot delay on Wednesday. 02 br
00 I'm sure we can get tremendous progress out of our meeting, so I hope you can arrange to be in the university on Thursday! 02 br
02 br
00 See you then! 02 br
00 Bob 0-
00 Thanks in advance 02 br
02 br
02 br
00 Hi George, 02 br
02 br
00 I am terribly sorry for your plans. Unfortunately, I already make an appointment that I cannot delay on Wednesday. 02 br
00 I'm sure we can get tremendous progress out of our meeting, so I hope you can arrange to be in the university on Thursday! 02 br
02 br
00 See you then! 02 br
00 Bob 0-
Top answer
0 Your level of informality and friendliness is good, Ignatius. I have just fixed the sentences a little: 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Hi George, 02 br 02 br 00 I am terribly sorry about your plans. Unfortunately, I have already make an appointment on Wednesday that I cannot cancel.
- 0 Your level of informality and friendliness is good, Ignatius.
- I have just fixed the sentences a little: 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Hi George, 02 br 02 br 00 I am terribly sorry about your plans.
- Unfortunately, I have already make an appointment on Wednesday that I cannot cancel.
- I'm sure we can make tremendous progress at our meeting, so I hope you can arrange to be at the university on Thursday.
- 02 br 02 br 00 See you then!
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0 Your level of informality and friendliness is good, Ignatius. I have just fixed the sentences a little: 02 br
02 br
02 br
00 Hi George, 02 br
02 br
00 I am terribly sorry about your plans. Unfortunately, I have already make an appointment on Wednesday that I cannot cancel. I'm sure we can make tremendous progress at our meeting, so I hope you can arran
02 br
02 br
00 Hi George, 02 br
02 br
00 I am terribly sorry about your plans. Unfortunately, I have already make an appointment on Wednesday that I cannot cancel. I'm sure we can make tremendous progress at our meeting, so I hope you can arran
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"I have already make an appointment" change make to made. It was arranged in the past not present.
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depending on how short you want it...
george,
sorry about your plans, but im busy wednesday.
im sure our meeting will be productive, so i hope ill see you at the university on thursday!
see ya then!
bob
george,
sorry about your plans, but im busy wednesday.
im sure our meeting will be productive, so i hope ill see you at the university on thursday!
see ya then!
bob
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i think of you are going to wirte informal mail to people you should just get a dictionary and look the proper words up in that
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