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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Influence our health

Are the following sentences acceptable?

1. All of us have experienced insomnia, so we want to know the reason of it, and how it influences our health.

2. We want to let more people realize how insomnia happens.
  

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Hi contiluo For these sentences, I would say: 1. All of us have experienced insomnia, so we want to know the reasons for it, and how it affects our health. 2.

  • Hi contiluo For these sentences, I would say: 1.
  • All of us have experienced insomnia, so we want to know the reasons for it, and how it affects our health.
  • 2.
  • We want to provide more people with information about the causes of insomnia.
  • You need to say either "reasons for" something or "causes of" something.
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Hi contiluo
For these sentences, I would say:

1. All of us have experienced insomnia, so we want to know the reasons for it, and how it affects our health.
2. We want to provide more people with information about the

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