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Industrial works( need your help greatly!!)
I am talking about future robots and if you see any mistakes, please correct me.
( robots will evolve through four generatons)
At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works. and eventually will replace human beings in the future. As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as industrial areas.
( robots will evolve through four generatons)
At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works. and eventually will replace human beings in the future. As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as industrial areas.
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I have underlined some problem areas: At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works . and eventually will replace human beings in the future . As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as industrial areas .
- I have underlined some problem areas: At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works .
- and eventually will replace human beings in the future .
- As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as industrial areas .
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I have underlined some problem areas:
At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works. and eventually will replace human beingsin the future. As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as ind
At the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works. and eventually will replace human beings
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Mister MicawberAt the stagbe of first generation robot, it wil do not only housework but also industrial works. and eventually will replace human beings in the future. As second and third generation robot's automation increase, it will replace human beings at service area as well as industrial areas.
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New and old mistakes:
At the stage of the first generatin robot, it will do not only housework but also industrial worsk and eventually it will replace human beings. As the second and third generation robot's automation increases, it will replace human beings in the service area we all as industrial area.
At the stage of the first generatin robot, it will do not only housework but also industrial worsk and eventually it will replace human beings. As the second and third generation robot's automation increases, it will replace human beings in the service area we all as industrial area.
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I am very confused. What should I do to improve my sentence?
generatin-->generation
industrial worsk-> industrial works
robot's automation--> robots' automation it-> they
service areas as well as industrial areas.
generatin-->generation
industrial worsk-> industrial works
robot's automation--> robots' automation it-> they
service areas as well as industrial areas.
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generatin-->generation-- Yes
industrial worsk-> manufacturing
robot's automation--> robots' automation it-> they-- Yes
service industry as well as manufacturing
industrial worsk-> manufacturing
robot's automation--> robots' automation it-> they-- Yes
service industry as well as manufacturing
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