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Hanuman_2000 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Indirect-speech
Hello,
1.The old man said, “Could I please come back and stay the next time I have a
treatment? Your children made me feel at home. Grown–ups are bothered by
my face, but children don’t seem to mind.”
The indirect of the above would be:
A. The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home and he also commented that grown-ups were bothered his face, but children did not seem to mind.
Is #A correct?
Thanks.
1.The old man said, “Could I please come back and stay the next time I have a
treatment? Your children made me feel at home. Grown–ups are bothered by
my face, but children don’t seem to mind.”
The indirect of the above would be:
A. The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home and he also commented that grown-ups were bothered his face, but children did not seem to mind.
Is #A correct?
Thanks.
Top answer
You are trying to do too much in one sentence. ________________________ The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home. He also commented that grown-ups were bothered by his face no comma but children did not seem to mind.
- You are trying to do too much in one sentence.
- ________________________ The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home.
- He also commented that grown-ups were bothered by his face no comma but children did not seem to mind.
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You are trying to do too much in one sentence.
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The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home. He also commented that grown-ups were bothered by his face no comma but children did not seem to mind.
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The old man asked her permission to come back and stay the next time he had a treatment and further added that her children had made him feel at home. He also commented that grown-ups were bothered by his face no comma but children did not seem to mind.
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