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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Independent writing: Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students

Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.



Today our world is becoming amazing because of the applying of technology. The people could go shopping without leaving their house; employees could work for their boss just in their bedroom. Then why can’t people stay at their home to take courses rather than go to classroom.



To me, going to school should is optional. How can I make the opinion? That is because of my personal understanding of the application of internet.



Internet brings convenience to our study. Nowadays, many place, including your home and your university, can be connect with internet once there is a computer and a telephone line, so it is possible to connect with your teacher while you are at home. Besides this, the internet technology is so advanced that image, sound, and video can be passed in seconds through the internet, so in this scene, we can takes the courses as if the teachers were in front of us. What’s more, the internet has additional powerful function----searching engine, through which we can immediately find the topic teacher mentioned and get also more about this topic besides the teacher’s opinion. We take class through the internet seem like that we have class both in the classroom and library. So, with the aid of internet, I think it feasible to not attend class.



Admittedly, going to classroom is conventional form in study, but this fix student’s time schedule. If they can properly arrange the time, students can do things that they value more. An art student, for example, could take weeks-days to accomplish the whole term math classes, which was an obligation course, to make himself more spare time to go to museum for an art exhibition. Since the schedule of an exhibition cannot be always suitable for the courses taken in classroom, to optionally attend the classroom then will be a good choice. Didn’t you think the exhibition is more valuable for the student than the math classes?








  

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Anon: I've made some suggestions for your first paragraphs. The others need some work, too, but I'll leave that to you. Today our world is becoming amazing because of the applying ("application" is better here) of technology.

  • Anon: I've made some suggestions for your first paragraphs.
  • The others need some work, too, but I'll leave that to you.
  • Today our world is becoming amazing because of the applying ("application" is better here) of technology.
  • The P eople can could go shopping without leaving their house; employees can could work for their boss from just in their bedroom.
  • Then why can’t people stay at their home to take courses rather than go to a classroom ?
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Anon: I've made some suggestions for your first paragraphs. The others need some work, too, but I'll leave that to you.

Today our world is becoming amazing because of the applying ("application" is better here) of technology. The People can could go shopping without leaving their house; employees can could work for their

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