I came across this in the sentence error identification part of the writing section of the SAT:
Many people have come to the party, he was pleased to note.
The answer turned out to be No Error, but then isn't this sentence comprised of two independent clauses joined by a comma??? Shouldn't a quotation mark or something be added before "Many people have come to the party?" if not, why are they unnecessary???
Thanks in advance
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I too would have punctuated it more clearly, but it seems OK: (That) Many people have come to the party, he was pleased to note.
— Mister Micawber
I too would have punctuated it more clearly, but it seems OK: (That) Many people have come to the party, he was pleased to note.
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I don't think it was a quotation. He didn't really say it, did he? He just noted it somewhere in his mind. And if there was no quotation of his speech, inverted commas aren't necessary. You can paraphrase the sentence: He was pleased to note that many people have come to the party.