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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Independance Day

Please correct the following sentences. Thanks.

It was the 4th of July, 2006; was celebrating her independence day. I saw a large congregation of dressed up white people either standing or sitting on the meadows that remained clustered around a mall. Children were screaming with joy, and some of them hitch-hiking their cycles around the mall. A happy and festive mood hung in the air. All necks were turned to the sky, and eyes riveted on it.

  

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It was the 4th of July, 2006; America was celebrating her Independence Day . I saw a large congregation of well-dressed white people standing or sitting on the grass that remained next to a mall. The children were shouting with joy, and some of them were peddling their bicycles around the mall.

— Mister Micawber

  • It was the 4th of July, 2006; America was celebrating her Independence Day .
  • I saw a large congregation of well-dressed white people standing or sitting on the grass that remained next to a mall.
  • The children were shouting with joy, and some of them were peddling their bicycles around the mall.
  • A happy, festive mood hung in the air.
  • All heads were turned to the sky and all eyes riveted on it.
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It was the 4th of July, 2006; America was celebrating her Independence Day. I saw a large congregation of well-dressed white people standing or sitting on the grass that remained next to a mall. The children were shouting with joy, and some of them were peddling their bicycles around the mall. A happy, festive mood hung in the air. Al
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