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Lucas21c Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Indefinite personal pronouns

Could you tell me whether the following sentence is right?
Thank you.

Although some looked dirty and others wore shabby clothes, nobody could laugh at anybody then because we all were undergoing the same hardship.
  

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It's OK. I would change it a bit: Although some of us looked dirty and others wore shabby clothes, nobody could laugh at anybody then because we all were undergoing the same hardship.

  • It's OK.
  • I would change it a bit: Although some of us looked dirty and others wore shabby clothes, nobody could laugh at anybody then because we all were undergoing the same hardship.
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It's OK.

I would change it a bit:

Although some of us looked dirty and others wore shabby clothes, nobody could laugh at anybody then because we all were undergoing the same hardship.

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