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Afzal A Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Increment in salary

To, The Director/CEO/Chairman

Dear Sir,
With due respect, I humbly like to bring a request for salary increment. i have been working in your company for the last 3 years and I have small salary and working at the same pay from last 2 years.

As you well aware that in last 2 years the inflation rate increased by more times in food, electricity and others utilities bills. Considering this situation, you are kindly requested to support me by increasing my salary. My current salary is Rs. 20,000/-.

I have always done my best with hard-work and sincere. Your positive action will highly appreciated. Thank you very much.

Truly yours,
Afzal Ahmed
Proposal Development Officer

(Please help me to arrange the above letter in a good manner and good words)
  

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Hello, Afzal—and welcome to English Forums. 'As you are aware' is a particularly noxious phrase that should always e avoided: if the person is already aware, he is offended, and if he is not yet aware, he is also offended. ] Dear Mr [surname], With due respect, I would like to request a salary increment.

  • Hello, Afzal—and welcome to English Forums.
  • 'As you are aware' is a particularly noxious phrase that should always e avoided: if the person is already aware, he is offended, and if he is not yet aware, he is also offended.
  • ] Dear Mr [surname], With due respect, I would like to request a salary increment.
  • I have been working for [ name ] company for the last three years , and I have been working at the same pay rate for the last two years , but in that time inflation has increased my food, electricity and other utility bills much faster than my current salary of Rs.
  • 20,000 can now manage .
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Hello, Afzal—and welcome to English Forums. 'As you are aware' is a particularly noxious phrase that should always e avoided: if the person is already aware, he is offended, and if he is not yet aware, he is also offended.

[name]
Director/CEO/Chairman [Please choose one.]

Dear Mr [surname],

With due respect, I woul
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Hi,
Mr. Mister Micawber

i'm very thankful to you in help me to write an increment letter to my company owner.

I just need to some change in these lines.
(and I have been working at the same pay rate for the last two years, but in that time inflation has increased my food, electricity and other utility bills much faster than my current
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You seem to know better than I, so please change it yourself.
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Please correct this para grammatically.

With due respect, I would like to request a salary increment. I have been working for HCS (Pvt.) Ltd. for the last three years, and I have been working at the same salary for the last two years, but in that time inflation has increased many times in food, electricity & other commodities. Considering this situation, much difficult for me to hold and
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With due respect, I would like to request a salary increment. I have been working for HCS (Pvt.) Ltd. for the last three years, and I have been working at the same salary for the last two years, but in that time inflation has increased my food, electricity and other expenses much faster than my current salary of Rs. 20,000 can now manage.

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