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Ansonguy Posted 8 years ago
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Increase/decrease/limit your love

Does it make sense to say "increase/decrease/limit your love? I will put that in a context.

(1) Brenda gradually increased her love for her stepdaughter as they lived together longer.

(2) Mary decreased her love for her stepson after she had a child.

(3) Parents should not limit their love for their children.

What is your opinion? Thanks a lot.

  

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The first two sound a bit clinical, as if love levels can be numerically quantified and controlled, and that seems rather odd. The third is fine. I would suggest for (1): Brenda's love for her stepdaughter gradually grew as they lived together longer.

  • The first two sound a bit clinical, as if love levels can be numerically quantified and controlled, and that seems rather odd.
  • The third is fine.
  • I would suggest for (1): Brenda's love for her stepdaughter gradually grew as they lived together longer.
  • and (2): Mary loved her stepson less after she had a child.
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The first two sound a bit clinical, as if love levels can be numerically quantified and controlled, and that seems rather odd. The third is fine.

I would suggest for (1):

Brenda's love for her stepdaughter gradually grew as they lived together longer.

and (2):

Mary loved her stepson less after she had a child.

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